literature

He Loves Me Like He Should

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Literature Text

You'll never know
What it's like
to be me
to have
someone like him
who i'll never love
like you
think i should.

It's not about
the body, nor
anything
like that
it's just about
someone loving me
just like
brothers should.  
OMG.

this.
poem.
actually.
has.

STRUCTURE!!!
THIS IS A NEW DEVELOPMENT IN TERMS OF NINA'S POETRY!!!!

if you read carfully, the syllables match for each line in each stanza (excepting one line, but it's close enough.). the weird thing is, after i wrote it in the way i usually write poems, which is just typing random ranting, i rearranged the lines to make them LOOK similar in length of each line. but then i counted the syllables and they actually turned out to match almost exactly. which is weird :O
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DarkenedAvo's avatar
Will the next development be punctuation? : P

But seriously good job for working on your skills. Stanzas and syllables are hard. Not my favourite poem but I can appreciate the effort.